Summerish Syntax

Experiment: Undoing rules against the pluralization of  present-progressive verbs.  Let the gerunds go forth and multiply.

the creatures were not as you may suppose alternating between invocations and revocations of their phosphorescence but rather teleporting between nations of allegedly uninhabited air.  For every atom belonging to them a darker belongs to me.  Or perhaps we are simply too slow.  Watch! They approach.  What have they against deepening blues disrupted by their flashing there-here jumpings.  If I open my mouth and believe there is a distinctive lack of light therein perhaps they will leap inside.  Perhaps your palette too shall know them, their night breakings, their jumpings.

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